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Writer's pictureמאיר פלג

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"הדבר הוצא מהקשרו". ביום שישי, סמוך להחריד לסיום שעות הפתיחה, עליתי על האוטובוס שייקח אותי כרגיל למערב העיר. שם הפיקדון של הים הגדול. שם השקיעה צובעת את השמים בארגמן שנראה כמו עין הדם [RAL]. החשש שמא אפספס את האוטובוס האחרון הביתה הפריע למנוחתי. ואז, וכדי 'להירגע', הנחתי את הנייד לכל רוחבו על ברכי, וצפיתי להנאתי ב"כיפה אדמה" ב...קישור חיצוני... חלפו שניות בודדות בלבד, הנהג בלם, ירד מההגה, לקח אקדח בידו וירה בנוסע מימין.. "מה עשית? למה??" בכיתי במרירות.. "לא לזה התכוונתי".. והוא ענה בקרירות, "אבל לא היה שם אף אחד מלבדו". מאת מר אהוד סתת


"The thing was taken out of context". On Friday, alarmingly close to the end of the opening hours, I boarded the bus that would take me as usual to the west of the city. Name of the deposit of the great sea. There the sunset paints the sky with a crimson that looked like the eye of blood [RAL]. The fear that I might miss the last bus home disturbed my rest. And then, and in order to 'calm down', I placed the mobile to its full width on my lap, and watched to my pleasure "Kippa Aduma" in... an external link... Only a few seconds passed, the driver braked, got off the wheel, took a gun in his hand and shot the passenger on the right.. "What did you do? Why??" I cried bitterly.. "That's not what I meant".. And he replied coldly, "But there was no one there but him." This passage describes a person riding a bus and watching a video on their phone. Suddenly, the driver shoots a passenger and the speaker asks why. The driver responds that there was no one else around. MORE This scenario appears to be a fictional or imagined one and the language and narrative style suggests a creative or imaginative piece of writing. The speaker is worried about missing the last bus home and tries to calm themselves by watching a video. However, the scene takes a dramatic turn when the driver shoots a passenger. The speaker expresses their shock and confusion and the driver's response is cold and seemingly without remorse. WHY The reason why the driver shot the passenger is not specified in the passage. The driver's response, "But there was no one there but him," is cryptic and does not provide a clear explanation for the shooting. The motivations for the driver's actions are left for interpretation. STORY The passage describes a scene in which a person is riding a bus and becomes disturbed by the fear of missing the last bus home. In an effort to calm down, the person begins watching a video on their phone. However, the peaceful moment is suddenly interrupted when the driver of the bus gets off the wheel, takes out a gun, and shoots a passenger. The speaker of the passage, who was watching the video, expresses shock and confusion and asks the driver why he shot the passenger. The driver's response, "But there was no one there but him," adds to the mystery and does not provide a clear explanation for the shooting. The scene is a dramatic one and the narrative style suggests it could be part of a creative or imaginative piece of writing. LIRIC This passage is not a lyric. It appears to be a description or scene from a fictional or imaginative piece of writing. The language and narrative style suggest a creative or imaginative work, rather than a song or poem. TRY A LIRIC ABOUT Sure, here is a lyric inspired by the scene described in the passage: Verse 1: Riding the bus, on my way to the west Watching a video, trying to do my best Fear creeping in, of missing the last bus home But then the driver, with a gun, he has shown Chorus: A shot in the dark, a passenger falls What was the reason, what was the cause? I cry out in shock, my heart full of pain Why did this happen, who's to blame? Verse 2: The driver speaks, his voice so cold "But there was no one there, but him, so bold" Confusion sets in, I can't understand What happened on this bus, in this land Chorus: A shot in the dark, a passenger falls What was the reason, what was the cause? I cry out in shock, my heart full of pain Why did this happen, who's to blame? Bridge: Questions linger, no answers in sight The fear and the pain, they take flight A scene so surreal, so strange and absurd Why did this happen, on this bus, we're all deterred Chorus: A shot in the dark, a passenger falls What was the reason, what was the cause? I cry out in shock, my heart full of pain Why did this happen, who's to blame? TRY A SCRIPT Sure, here is a script inspired by the scene described in the passage: INT. BUS - DAY The camera shows a person, who we will refer to as the Protagonist, riding on a bus. They are looking at their phone and appear worried. PROTAGONIST (V.O): On Friday, alarmingly close to the end of the opening hours, I boarded the bus that would take me as usual to the west of the city. The fear that I might miss the last bus home disturbed my rest. The Protagonist watches a video on their phone in an effort to calm down. PROTAGONIST (V.O): And then, in order to 'calm down', I placed the mobile to its full width on my lap, and watched to my pleasure "Kippa Aduma" in... an external link... Suddenly, the bus stops and the driver gets off the wheel, taking a gun in his hand. DRIVER: (pulling out a gun) PASSENGER ON RIGHT: (startled) What the- The driver shoots the passenger on the right. The Protagonist cries out in shock. PROTAGONIST: What did you do? Why?? DRIVER: (coldly) But there was no one there but him. The Protagonist looks around the bus in disbelief, not understanding what just happened. PROTAGONIST (V.O): And he replied coldly, "But there was no one there but him." The camera pans out as the Protagonist continues to look around the bus in shock. PROTAGONIST (V.O): The fear and confusion sets in, why did this happen on this bus? What was the reason, what was the cause?



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